With something drifting and something shifting, the earth still held the sky.
Very Haiku-esque. Though technically its not a haiku structure. I liked this one. This is what good poetry is all about...
A very good poetry nicely framed in beautiful words. Short and clear about the message.Take care.Riya
how beautiful. as always. as you are in side out... :)
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Standing beside Papa's hospital bed. Staying the night here and it.is.exhausting. I had typed so much after this sentence. But it all g...
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Very Haiku-esque. Though technically its not a haiku structure.
I liked this one. This is what good poetry is all about...
A very good poetry nicely framed in beautiful words. Short and clear about the message.
Take care.
Riya
how beautiful. as always. as you are in side out... :)
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