Monday, July 30, 2012

It was enough

Large vessels were bought and heaved
How much could a photograph hold?
But the memories and thoughts just flaked away
And now rest in an origami fold
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3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very Haiku-esque. Though technically its not a haiku structure.

I liked this one. This is what good poetry is all about...

9:09 AM
Anonymous said...

A very good poetry nicely framed in beautiful words. Short and clear about the message.

Take care.
Riya

8:49 PM
Unknown said...

how beautiful. as always. as you are in side out... :)

12:28 AM

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