Where it cracked

on
Not in front of known ones
But before strange faces
Not with a legacy of blazing trails
But with assortments of traces
Not in neat, straight flushes
But in haphazard aces
Not in large, loud, shiny cities
Big hearts break in small places

Comments

Neo said…
Its beautiful and it rhymes.
Amazing !
9:09 PM
Unknown said…
it's beautiful ... can i borrow it? wanna mail it to someone. of course .. i will mention that it's yours .. :)
1:02 AM
Serendipity said…
Why are u sitting around writing such lovely poetry for us for FREE?? Makes me feel guilty
7:08 AM
DewdropDream said…
Agree with Neo and Serendipity :)
5:25 PM
Mukta Raut said…
hi all, thank you...and no, this is not for free. I'm hoping that one of you gets very rich soon and sends me four crores out of goodwill.

omni - of course, you can! :-)
12:04 AM
vishvesh said…
Aha!
2:02 PM
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